Meri khwahishen kuch baaki hain,
Jeevan ek alpaviraam hai,
Kavi ka naam badnaam hai,
Jeevan mein mere liye bacha hi kya hai.
Log kisi aur par fida hain,
Haseenaye doosron ke baahon mein jaane ke liye bekraar hain,
Mera chota bhai mujhse behtar hai,
Jeevan mein mere liye bacha hi kya hai.
Meri maa mujhse naraaz hai,
Mere dost aapas mein kehte hain;
“arre chod yaar, who toh bekar hai.”
Jeevan mein mere liye bacha hi kya hai.
Lekin, sochne lagta hoon main, upar ek bhagwan hai,
Mere maathe par bhi uska haath hai,
Har ek ki andar ek bhagwan hai,
Jiska naam aatma-vishwas hai.
Mere haath kalam ki orr jaate hain,
Kaagaz ko chooker who likh jaate hain,
Log rukkar, padhkar, bole jaate hain…
“wah bhai wah, ye kya likhta hai…!”
It's lyrical. You can explain what it means to me someday, I'm sure it'd mean Beautiful. *winkie*
ReplyDeletewow..thnx 4 d critical review...i feel honoured...really....thnx da
ReplyDeleteok..
ReplyDeletefirst doubt of urs....life wid a coma?....wat i wanted to say was dat my life at dat particular moment too small too insignificant...too tiny to have any influence in d sentence of life....its kinda wonky...but hope u get d coma in a sentence kinda relationship....
nice thinkin da....hope u meant the same wen u wrote the poem.....
ReplyDeletebut think twice.......is a coma insignificant.....cant a COMA KILL A MAN......jus think of.....KILL HIM NOT LET HIM LIVE.......so.....????
ReplyDelete""nice thinkin da....hope u meant the same wen u wrote the poem.....""
ReplyDeletewats dat supposed to mean...deres a difference between criticism and plain cynicism my friend....tread carefully....
hi hi....watever...but in pacha malayalam....v call it.....Chori unplugged....bear wid it dude....
ReplyDeleteEntheru behalam!! 8-|
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